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| Elizabeth Ebony 2006-06-09 ch 1,  | abuseThis is such a beautiful piece,i have never read anything so gorgeous.Favourites.I can't describe how much i love it. E.Ebony |
| A Beautiful Nightmare 2006-05-12 ch 1, | abuseWow.. beautiful... ethereal... I like how all of them aren't capitalized... it's a cool effect... also... you should go over the punctuations a bit... like a comma between "oh god" and after "star-shine"... other than that though... it was a wonderful read! |
| lessons you learn 2006-04-29 ch 1, | abuseIt's glass roses, sorry I keep changing my name. Well, this is the second time I've tried to review this- the first I was commenting on it I noticed I'd quoted the whole poem! Anyways- "full of storm, and star-shine and crimson skies,brambles that reach and reach" lovelovelovelovelove. Beautiful imagery you paint with your words, darling. "they shed their blooms, delicate,just like she." love the way you end it, makes me want to know more about the girl. Never stop writing |
| wolfeh 2006-04-28 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just ... wow. Amazing writing, descriptive and cryptic and ... and ... wow. I sit in awe. *sits in awe* KW! ~wolfeh (3.02 in the pm) |
| classic violet 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous! |
| GypsyMothra 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is just beautiful. Has the feeling of spring flowers just blossoming (delicately.) |
| lackluster 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseit reminds me of spring. i love the language you use and how you use it. |
| perdita's kiss 2006-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI was gonna quotesomething and say that it just stuk out for me, but the whole thing did. it's beautiful. |