| Reviews for The Love Letter |
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SuzannaR 3/22/09 . chapter 1Nice, I liked the quick change of image again as in the previous haiku. You start off giving us an image of a letter lovingly and carefully thought out and written on the best paper, and you twist it at the end, because it was all for nothing. That's nice. What a waste, though eh? I liked your closing line, especially since it was written in that strange, almost Shakespearean language? At first, I wondered why you wrote it like that, but now I think that it fits in well with the image of the first 2 lines. I liked this. :) Suzanna from the Review Game Marathon, see link in profile. |
Solitary Fatalist 8/2/08 . chapter 1A very moving thought.. I was being stupid when I first read it, thinking "Was that it? It could use more lines.." And then I realized that it was a haiku.. XD |
mayoopatel 7/30/06 . chapter 1Interesting...like it...true indeed. REad some of my stuff and give me some comments too. |
tamarkaph2006 7/11/06 . chapter 1Sad indeed |
onyxdragonflyy 6/8/06 . chapter 1:{such a waste...a heart thrown away that was never known Great job with this! |
Needa S 4/29/06 . chapter 1Sad, but true in ways. Splendid job! |
Moondog Dozier 4/20/06 . chapter 1Sad, but true in many cases. Good work. |