I am in love with this haiku. Most beautiful. Fairies, Willows...ripples. So fantastica...very good!

"see how she marks the water

(whilst wings aspread) with ripples"

This is a really enchanting image!

Beautifully done. Write on!

oh my god, that is so beautiful! you really can pull your reader into the magical realms of fantasy, and make them believe it's reality. AWESOME! AMAZING IMAGES!

p.s. thank you for the review!

This paints SUCH a gorgeous picture. I love love love. The imagery is incredible. Just bravo. I love it. This and "The Waif" are my two favorites of yours.

Beautiful!

You have created a lovely image in my mind... _ *LEODEL*

This has a marvelous sound. Good work.

[5/7/5]

Dreams of gossamer,

Darting midst warm candlelight,

Fairy,—lightning bug.

[5.7.5]

Tinkling joys on breeze,

All aglitter with happiness,

Charmed white lily bells.

[5,7,5]

Wake me from this sleep,

Leave me all its sweet refrains,

Siren fairy dreams.

[5-7-5]

With a humble thanks,

For so many mysteries,

Each, magic, unique.