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| KASoroka 2006-04-20 ch 1,  | abusenicely done, but i would suggest changing the word " night" on one of the two lines where you repeate the rhyming word " so black against the night No cars, no roads, no city lights, just you and the darkness of night" ( ex. just you and the darkness in sight) Also it is correct in poetry to capitalize the first letter in each line. either way, i enjoyed reading this poem =) Nicely done. |