Ooh...Catching last line! I did notice a few typos in this chapter, but other then that, it looks great.

Hmm...I'm liking the pen pal concept, but I find it difficult to keep track of who's person you're writing as. Other then that, it looks great. Good spelling and stuff:D

I find the beginning was sort of confusing and pointless...the whole note writing thing...And you forgot the 'w' here :"Her hair is red this eek. Next week I think she’s going black". Other than that, it looks good, and intriguing. I'm off to read chapter two!

Poor Serenity.

O.. Serenity is becoming Cassie? Anyway, the letters were funny but I think you guys should've posted them a bit earlier because I don't remember what Jessie & Kate said before.

Check the first sentence!Ha, as if Serenity needs to be told about dialing 0..

Aw. Short.

wow.. they're rather talkative.. =)

Yay! I love this story :D I hope you update soon. I've never read anything really like it before.

Haha, reminds me of some times in my years of high school. I like the characters, they're very believable and average. Like me :D

I really like this chapter! :D It's kind of like... not so organized and things come in after the other. Random fun is fun

lol, the journal entries are cute. Her dad and his sticky notes are so funny :D I like the whole note passing, letter writing and journal entry format so far. Pretty neat!

Hahaha, I like Kate's letter. :) It was funny!

I like this story so far :D Looks interesting!

Hi seller of dreams and sha-sha-rules! I'm Donna Dark on FF.Net, and this story rocks!