warm and promise filled, an excellent start to this series, so alive this one, it even sweats, wonderfully done

Haha, you stole a shopping cart, right on! The last line is wonderful. It makes you wonder what's next.

I'm not sure I saw how this was going to be a series, until I got to that last stanza, and it draws you forward, makes you wonder: if you wore your heart on your sleeve in July, what happened to make you stop?

A lovely start, my dear. This has such potential--I do hope you continue!

oh i loved this! brutally honest, breathtakingly beautifully sad... the way most things are... gorgeous job.