hmm i remember for a dance-type thing show we had bright yellow raincoats and boots. it was kind of a weird contrast to the sad type of music, but it did liven it up a little bit.

yellow at a funeral would be nice.

-naomi

ps: wonderful poem by the way

- And don't cry."Oh, we tried our best -

that was so desolate, brave, lonely & sad.

beautiful. effin gorgeous. i love the concept, the vague imagery, the idea of the funeral.. everything. great job. keep writing.

sososo incredibly sad. ah, death is such a powerful thing in means as to how it can take such a toll on human emotions. this poem portrays that so well, in such a lovely way. i like the formatting too. lovely job♥

such a pretty sad scene, rainy too, and coldish, i love it, beautiful

A mournful loss so tragically captured. Well done. ~*

Yellow at a funeral.There's a certain warmth to that.

A heartbreaking follow up to the first chapter. I can relate to this all too well..you capture the simple pain of it better than most that I have read before. Well done!

A wonderfully poignant piece. Yes, tears are for the living...

I look forward to the next in this series...and to the rest of your writings...