"Angie and Gwen had spent about half of their lived doing community service"

I think you meany "lives."Frankly, I'd have to say I found this story a bit pointless. You made snide and sardonic remarks on your own version of a well known Grimm fairytale. The fact that you even altered the story annoys me, but that's beside the point.Anyway, that's just my opinion but I felt obligated to give it.

Ta. -Allison

I was pretty skeptical about this story when I read the summary, but I read it anyway and I'm glad I did. Nice job on one of the only fairy tale parodies I've ever read that was worth it. =)

-Devon