BRILLIANT :-)

I'm speechless. For 2 reasons.
1. The guy in the story sounds exactly like a Chase I know. And looks like him (from the description given)...I'm mad for him. hells bells, man, I even look a tad like the girl (again, from the description given - except I'm not so perfect, lol) But those are my exact feelings about this Chase (the nerves, the obsession, etcetc.)

2. It's GORGEOUS. Your writing style is really really pretty and eloquent... I love the train of thought commentary format combined with the song... anyways.
Love it.
Becca
PS - you said you changed the name to Chase for a reason...mind emailing me why? (just curiosity... if it bothers you, then don't email me...^.^)

Ooh, the only Britney Spears song apart from 'Not a girl, not yet a woman' that I like! That was so ADORABLE of Chase, being willing to wait for poor Sasha...she's so scared and cute too. Lol, thrusting herself into the janitor's closet to hide from Chase was funny to me, for some reason. Love the description!

wow..amazing..I really wish this wasn't a one shot story..but I don't know what else you could really write about..I love it ^_^

Ooh, very nice. You capture emotions wonderfully - I could feel myself breathing as quickly as she must have while hiding in the broom closet. Well done.

Aww...Chase is a sweetheart. And I really love the name Chase. Good story.

Hi. Sorry this isn't a signed review, but I'm too lazy to log on...

Anyways, I really liked the story. The only thing is there are a few typoes...watch out for that in the future.

Good job,

Ladicius Rayne

Hi! I loved the story! There's something about songfics that I just really like. But this story also had a life of its own, and it was really realistic.

The only tiny little thing that could be improved is when she comes out of the closet, it isn't really clear how she runs into Brandon, if she had to search the school or not.

I look forward to reading other stuff you have written/will write!

~Wildflowermoon