Awesome poem!

Poor girl! That is indeed incredibly sad! but, quite good!

thank u for reviewing! >.< ur poem is heartbreaking and tragic. i love it! T.T although i never felt this way before, i have a first love and he left me cause of well his pride. if i ever saw him do such a thing, my heart wld break for sure...

Brilliant! I liked, you wrote it so well, I know the feeling!!

this brought tears to my eyes. beautiful and heartbreaking. it's really good, adding it to favorites if you don't mind. amazing poem.