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| Lestat's Secret 2006-06-03 ch 1,  | abuseInstead of using "cua" i think you should use "Because". Or "Cause". Either one, i think, would just sound better. |
| TheNextLittleMermaid 2006-05-10 ch 1, | abuseCOLLEEN! u ROCK at this stuff...but r u sure this poem isnt about me? hehehe.. luv ya and miss ya ALOT! rave this summer! |
| Windup Hopping Lederhosen 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseAnd you have a big nose. . . I loves this, a very good start to your portfolio. Mattie's dying today! WHEE! lol |
| Dawn Gabriel 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is brutally honest. Really describes the side that no one sees. Good job!~TM |
| ode to a firefly 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseReally unique with all of the "un-" words. However, I might suggest that you use "'cause" instead of "cuz." It looks and flows better. ~Christine ^.^ |