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TheNextLittleMermaid 2006-05-10 ch 1,	yes i finally figured out how to stop my pop up blocker...YAY! i LUV this poem...unlike my poems which really stink...u need to go public colleen!! i luv the imagary that the ride taking u up and down just like life...EXCELLANT! soo...i might c jason later...: )
O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.st... 2006-05-10 ch 1,	Hey, this makes sense! The ride, being dizzy- Good tying with the beginning and the end. And I agree with the first reviewer, if you scratch out the "and", the poem would flow better. Also, you might want to rephrase "life is harder than it seems." Since it's the only line that mentions life, comparing it to the ride, you might want it to make it strong/deeper...But overall great poem. Bravo^^
Windup Hopping Lederhosen 2006-04-21 ch 1,	YAY C-DAWG! Only I'm allowed to say my writing sux lol. WICKED good! I need to order a pizza from Austin. . . a city in Texas! I loves you!
toxic-noodle725 2006-04-20 ch 1,	wo! hey this isn't bad at all! LIAR!i was thinkin bout writing a poem like this yesterday. weird. i liked this a lot! hmm. im kinda dizzy reading ur italicized words...good job!
Lowell Boston 2006-04-20 ch 1,	Good, but I think if you eliminate all the 'And's your meter will flow better. Great title and ending. Thanks for posting.