 Halcyon Impulsion 2006-07-03 . chapter 1Ah yes, the moments when we wish that dreams were really kismet :) Good stuff. |
 Pink Sparrow 2006-04-28 . chapter 1Oh, wow, I love how this is written, its so easy to relate to, and its so true. Beautiful. |
 ronshaberry 2006-04-24 . chapter 1Ah, yes... I like to imagine things how they should be... which is always beneficial to me... |
 randompoetry 2006-04-23 . chapter 1Wow, I loved this, great. |
 Moondog Dozier 2006-04-21 . chapter 1Some truly unique phrase work in this. I like this because it is kind of drapped in possibility, maybe and what if's. I also enjoyed the specifics of this, they help the reader relate to the individuals. Well written. |
 Aquafied 2006-04-20 . chapter 1ahthis is like part of my life written and dictatedeveryday
amazing |
 chaos called creation 2006-04-20 . chapter 1doesn't everyone? :) |