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| likes to headbang 2006-04-22 ch 1,  | abusenice |
| LyrreM 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuse(claps) well written.I can feel the trauma. ;) |
| bahaghari 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseI liked the "-Manic sanity-" part. |
| Camryn Morlegg 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseInter-esting.My attention was caught. Love the breaks in between letters. A different look at your standard haiku, no? It is a haiku, right? -_-; |
| Naibz 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abusefirst line is very putrid with a hint of anxiety, second feels of anxiety a manic anxiety. pretty interesting piece. |