I swear that this is one of my favorite stories up here! Please update soon

PLEASE UPDATE!

This story is really good you should finish it!

So, first I wanted to tell you that this story was very good...it'a a shame that you haven't finished it...I have to admit a have a soft spot for romance novels where the heroine is pregnant with the hero's baby (guess you can call it my "fetish" or something...). Anyway, you were really good and you know it's kinda never too late to pick up where you left off because these characters deserve their happily ever after.

I noticed that you haven't wrote anything thing beyond chapter 5. Is it possible that you will be going back to this story or not. I did think that it is a good story, does need work on grammar and punctuation; but otherwise good. It would be a shame for it to be ended in mid-story, but understandable when people have writer's block and can't go any further.

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HELLO PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY COME ON CHOP CHOP I'M REALLY LIKING THIS STORY AND WANT A HAPPY ENDING!

great story. Yous should update

This story was interesting. I read your profile page and saw you are from Texas. I'm from Dallas, but I had a completly different experience then you did growing up. I am a african american female and I have only recently started to check out the IR fanfiction out of pure curiosity and litte experience. I appreciate the truth in your story that I have seen in society. I await more from you.

This is a good story, gets a lil confusing at times when you switch back and forth from the past to the present. Hope you continue with this story I really like it. PLEASE PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE!

wow, I am definitely interested in this story! Cn't wait to see what happens next.

I don't know how I missed this story, but I love what you've written so far! Will you finish this or have you moved on to something else? I would love to see how these two young people resolve their issues especially since there are children involved...

please update soon!

really good. I wish u had continued it i dont think u will but i will favorite either way b/c it is so freakin awesome... One of the best stories i've read on this site that isn't finished

i really love this story widh you would update

luv ur story so far, so keep updating!

Good job, can't wait to see how their story progresses.