 destinys20 2009-11-04 . chapter 5 great story. Yous should update |
 Fatal Mars 2009-11-01 . chapter 5This story was interesting. I read your profile page and saw you are from Texas. I'm from Dallas, but I had a completly different experience then you did growing up. I am a african american female and I have only recently started to check out the IR fanfiction out of pure curiosity and litte experience. I appreciate the truth in your story that I have seen in society. I await more from you. |
 igot4 2009-10-28 . chapter 5This is a good story, gets a lil confusing at times when you switch back and forth from the past to the present. Hope you continue with this story I really like it. PLEASE PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE! |
 BlueAki 2009-10-20 . chapter 5wow, I am definitely interested in this story! Cn't wait to see what happens next. |
 Philly Girl1 2009-09-28 . chapter 5I don't know how I missed this story, but I love what you've written so far! Will you finish this or have you moved on to something else? I would love to see how these two young people resolve their issues especially since there are children involved... |
 SapphireEyes16 2008-08-05 . chapter 1please update soon! |
 philipa1234 2008-06-08 . chapter 5really good. I wish u had continued it i dont think u will but i will favorite either way b/c it is so freakin awesome... One of the best stories i've read on this site that isn't finished |
 Hiding From My Lies 2008-03-18 . chapter 5i really love this story widh you would update |
 SapphireEyes16 2007-12-21 . chapter 5luv ur story so far, so keep updating! |
 Miz Priss 2007-05-30 . chapter 5Good job, can't wait to see how their story progresses. |
 kaci 2007-04-22 . chapter 5 This is such a great story. Are you planning on updatiing it soon? |
 JusticeWriter 2007-03-22 . chapter 5You should update this story. It's great. |
 CHIIJOY 2007-01-01 . chapter 5I love their romance and hope that she tells him about the baby. Update soon. |
 keeysie 2006-10-08 . chapter 5 Okay so please tell me you plan on updating sometime soon like tommorrow because I am absolutely in love with this story and so interested to find out how Charlie and the main character got together. Thanks :) |
 brittany 2006-10-06 . chapter 5 more more more. please. i love this story! |