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| The French Orchid 2008-07-22 ch 1,  | abusevery go. |
| L.C. Drusilla 2006-04-27 ch 1, | abuseSWEET! You totally have to have the mindframe of a play and all instead of a story setting. That was one cool skit, it SERIOUSLY rocked. |
| Tasha West 2006-04-22 ch 1, | abuseInteresting...but why did you write it as a play and not as a story, I think it would have been better than way, but anyways it is ur story and not mine; anyway, when you put the names of those who were talking you should have made it bold or something and then put the stage directions in italics or something like that. Never-the-less it was good and it was good to find out what happened before Josie shot herself... Ciao Bambino, Tasha -x- |