Reviews for Trade of a Lifetime

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no name 2007-12-04 ch 1, anon.	abusehonestly i think this story sucks it doesnt seem to have a point and it seems very very rushed i dont think this story is going newhere but in circles it is very boring to read i almost fell asleep i feel like it kind of like many of the stories on here and not very original no HARD feelings... well maybe who am i kidding this is a flame
no name 2007-12-04 ch 1, anon.	abusethis story is utterly boring i mean i almost fell asleep reading it your paragraphs are way toop lon g and i feel like this story has no point honestly i think you should just take this stroy down for the sake of other readers beside me no HARD feelings well maybe
well 2007-06-27 ch 1, anon.	abusethis first chap was good, but only because it was practically an exact replica of "Seeing Through Tears," a brilliant story that shouldn't EVER be reproduced.
NOT GONNA BOTHER 2007-05-11 ch 1, anon.	abusetoo many errors with spelling Doesnt flow Drones on VERY similar to a popular story on fictionpress ALMOST word-for-word of it Your mom wrote a similar story a while ago ohh she went there And dont worry this isnt a flame Oh shoot..yea it is... oh well, who cares, not me
wondering 2007-03-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseum hi ive been reading your story, And its well written and stuff but i coudnt help but notice some things that seems a lot liek this other story i read. its by bleeding air called the contract. her main characters name is katlyn too and there are other things. the demon situation and stuff. i guess its not like their going to start casting wishes but i just thought id ask. i dont mean to offend you. im just curious but maybe im wrong. if i am im sorry. but good story so far i liek it a lot!
Ducky 06 2007-02-16 ch 2,	abusestupid jocks. they're so annoying and think they can have eceryone. ugh. anyways, nice chapter!
Ducky 06 2007-02-16 ch 1,	abusenice first chapter! I like how she drove the teacher out. some of my friends did that to our spanish teacher once. heh. anyways, i like your plot line.
I Quoth Nevermore 2007-02-09 ch 3,	abuseI like this. Pretty sweet. Update please!
elisefey 2007-02-08 ch 3,	abuseI really like the premise of this. The summary is what grabbed me and pulled me in. Her brother's dream about the ninja thing totally cracked me up. Btw, in this chapter sometimes you call the guy she's on a date with Chase and sometimes you call him Mitch... did you mean to do that? Good story! Update!
this-story-freaking-sucks 2007-02-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseI hated this with a passion. In fact I have a bit of vomit in the back of my throat, just at the sight of it. Please spare us before you think of another idioctic story. AND stop leaving nasty reviews on people's pages, because your story/chapter was not great at all..none whatsoever. I'm tired of seeing your name attached to reviews, putting down great stories when I almost had a freaking seizure when I read yours.No wonder you have so few reviews after so long Its only critism so dont take it harshly hun. Hope NOT to see more of you in the future Hate ya
Izumi-no-Junko 2007-02-05 ch 3,	abuseThis is really good so far, I really hope to see an update again soon~
the rocket apple 2007-01-20 ch 3,	abusenice. I don't usually go for the supernatural, but this is very well written. Are Mitch and the demon boy one and the same?
Imalefty 2006-12-17 ch 1,	abuseinteresting beginning. funny how her status could change just that fast, right? ;) stupid popular kids. anyway, i love the beginning-- even her teacher doesn't know who she is! mitch certainly is the mysterious character... how DID he know her name? your writing is impeccable grammar wise. (unlike mine, haha) anyway, i'll have to read the rest later since it's getting late. sounds like a promising start. oh, and thank you for reviewing my story, by the way. i'm really glad you like it. i'm also asian and i also have brown eyes, though i'm 5'5", which isn't that bad for an asian. XD -Lefty
La Tentateur 2006-07-27 ch 1,	abusehey *! love you i read your profile and... YOUR HAMSTER IS DEAD! DEAD I TELL YOU! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! chokes* xoxo Karen btw, "who is" is not the same as "whose"
Anne Onymus 2006-05-17 ch 3,	abusesorry, i havent updated SiS in ages... i started a new story, but i promis i will get back to SiS. okay, a bit confused with this chapter; it said that Mitch came to pick her up, but when she got out of the car, she was with Chase. she was supposed to be going to a bar with chase, but ended up at a party with hase, when Mitch picked her up. have i got that right? i reread it and that's what i got both times. anywho; i like where this story's hging; lotsa possibilities. oo oo oo i wanna know who this mystery guy is. i think it's Mitch, but i dont think Mitch would be that random with the "sexy kitten" stuff... maybe he would... i dunno. update soon! :) yay, im one of your favorite authors, that means so much to me! Cheers; x0x Anne

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