|Reviews for two days in madras|
| emsworth 4/23/06 . chapter 1
one of your most personal poems..it's long, but i still wish it were longer. although i can't understand how you can stand the weather. you almost seem to like it. te amo!
| Jezsh 4/21/06 . chapter 1
I think this is lovely. It isn't perfect, but it's very beautiful. The feelings are conveyed well and I find it really emotive. Everything you described is really tangible. A lovely piece.