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Reviews For: The Rain Dance
The-Golden-Hour 2009-03-31 . chapter 1
ill defiantly be there ;)

lol great poem!
Amalia Jagd 2006-06-25 . chapter 1
haha... words here in this poem are like... perfect! it's almost tickling me to dance... like.. really. this is an awesome work!
ForeverTwilightForeverDawn 2006-06-09 . chapter 1
i really like the first two...stanzas, i guess you'd call them? there was great description...although excitement everywhere didn't seem to fit. also, i don't know if the partial rhyme was intentional, but i think it would be better without rhyme at all. i like it!
Eirian Rhianu 2006-04-21 . chapter 1
this has a nice rhythm...it reminds me of some sort of tribal dance.
HHHHHHH 2006-04-21 . chapter 1
Hell yeah! I'm a voodoo man! I'm gonna dance this naked!!
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