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| pagemaster09 2006-10-03 ch 1,   | I luv this! It's great, keep it up! |
| Made in Britain 2006-05-03 ch 1, | Very well put I think this is really good, very poetic. Sorry I assumed you were a boy by the way... I'm not normally dumb, just occasionally ^.^ |
| Windup Hopping Lederhosen 2006-04-25 ch 1, | Deep. Well, at least its never hurt Laura. . . the French Horn will never leave her! Justin's back from exile! Tell you more when you get back. . . |
| stephen7687 2006-04-21 ch 1, | I liked the last two lines the most, it showed a lot of passion and got your point across, about how you desire it but fear it, very good work. |