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Another soul in this realm
2006-08-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseSounds like me...I really like it!
DynamicEquilibrium
2006-04-24
ch 1,
abuseThis made me smile, right here. Ypu have just made my day in this wonderful piece of information most would shun and frown upon. It's like a piece of cheesecake (the best cake, in my opinion) and you know it's full of god-knows-what, but you feel happy when you eat it because of the taste. The taste, so to say, was a rich and bubbly flavour filled with that hint of sarcasm as well as a mocking tone that most people would call arrogance, but it makes this all the better! It's a relief from the depressing poems, and I really enjoyed your poem. Don't think I should tell you to fix anything because changing it will just ruin the personality you have put into it. It gets to the point, but in the most fun way possible. *Applause*

-Dynamic Equilibrium
Icey Yun
2006-04-21
ch 1,
abuseLol, this was very well written and it made me crack a smile!

Kudos to you my friend!
Daffodil Elizabeth
2006-04-21
ch 1,
abuseHa! This was great fun and great advice.
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