Oh my.

Slight cliffhanger, but I really enjoyed reading this. Nothin' like parent-child bonding in literature; can't hardly get enough of that stuff.

Keep it up!



~ARS

Interesting... you should really continue the story! It has good possibilities.

I like the description and then characters! The names are pretty cool too...! I bet it will become more interesting :)

-_- grammar = EVIL! I like this chap. please update soon.

I really like this story a lot. evil cliffy though. please update soon.