omg... this is friggen awesome! And why didn't you show me this one!

*wagging finger* You're in trouble missy! ;P

well, anyway... i kinda had to read this multiple times to kinda get the jist of it... and i like the title... it's lyke 'yea! click me if you dare!' *but then again it's me typing... and clicking *cackles* and... well... yea... ttyl

i like it. neat. powerful.~Liz

"They will write slaughter with the sidewalk chalk..."

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I like this. . . the last stanza is rather nice, I think it ties it all together pretty well. I especially like the last two lines. . . Don't really know what else you're looking for as far as commentary on the last stanza goes. Anyway, I like it overall, and I REALLY appreciate your review- sorry I couldn't be more helpful.: D