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TwinkleHeart
2007-03-30
ch 9,
abuseWAH OMG IM SO MAD FICTION PRESS WAS MESSING UP I JUST FINISHED READING THIS AND U PUT IT UP LIEK 4 DAYS AGO LOLZZ ANYWAYZ WHATS GONNA HAPPEN!?!?!?!?! O.O ANDD OMG THEY KISSED SO SWEET
unconnected14
2007-03-28
ch 9,
abuseGreat chapter. Update soon.
evilcleo
2007-03-27
ch 9, anon.
abuseNice added twist. A little jealousy will make it more interesting (at least to me). Not a bad cliffy either.
soccerbabe16
2007-03-26
ch 9,
abusewow! this is an awesome story you've got here. I love how things are developing and all the romance... i like how he keeps kissing her ;-) Hope you update soon.

Harley
ebonydragon
2006-10-05
ch 8,
abuseWow...this is a really interesting story! Well...not interesting...totally AWESOME!Umm..could you update please?
NO LONGER USING
2006-09-24
ch 2,
abuseOiy this second chapter was wonderful. I loved how you can show what she feels about him clearly and the dialogue flow was very natural. Nice job. ~I've said enough~
Mei1105
2006-09-22
ch 8,
abuseHey! I'm online again! Don't worry about the delay, I know how you feel. I've just moved to uni (the exams went well thanks!) and I only just got online today. Thankfully none of my reviewers have been threatening me with pitchforks. . . I think.

Ethan has a challenge! Woo! Fun! My romantic side has been drowning recently (hence most of my work has been angst related), this is just the kind of thing I need to read!

Update soon! I'm still here waiting for more! :)

P.S. I'll be keeping an eye on Everyday with you!
dyingofluv
2006-09-21
ch 8,
abuseYes it did! And Im waiting for more! awethome chapter! :]
Alenor
2006-09-20
ch 8,
abuseheya, it's ok about the wait. i probably wouldn't have had much time to read it, i don't get much reading time in big chunks at the moments. i've just had my trials and i start my HSC in about 4 weeks so yeah. on the plus side i finish school is 7 DAYS!! gosh, it's weird! anyway, i hope you're enjoying uni/college, i'm not quite sure whether you call it one or the other. this was a great chappie and i'm glad you plan to continue, cya later ~ Alenor.
TwinkleHeart
2006-09-19
ch 8,
abuseOMG THIS STORY ISH LIKE SO GOOD I WONDER WHATS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT
Mila J
2006-09-18
ch 8,
abuseI LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! =]
NO LONGER USING
2006-09-18
ch 1,
abuseI loved your intro...great begining. ~Lacy
Ck90
2006-08-07
ch 7, anon.
abuseI liked this chapter and again I want No NEED to know What happens Next due to my curiosity that is escalating! So Update Soon! I hate Cliff Hangers!
Allison
2006-08-02
ch 7, anon.
abuse*dances around*

Hehehehe! I love it when he says my name!
Mei1105
2006-08-01
ch 7,
abuseAw! I love fluffy stuff! You're amazing!

How long is this story going to be? Is it going to be 'One wish' length or longer than that?

Sadly I think my writers block is returning. Could be due to lack of reviews on fictionpress. Can't be fanfiction. The muses are partying about that!

Our last day was picture snapping too. My exam results are in sixteen days. I'm cringing. I know I did badly in my last two. I needed more time.

Keep it up! Update soon! :)
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