lovely. Brilliantly concise, I like how 'sting' in the first stanza and 'sing' in the third really brings the piece together. Great ending too. Great piece actually :)

So trajic, yet beautiful. Great job.

Loved the simplicity of this; that summery vibe - writing lullabies in the sky makes me think of how you count clouds in the summer.

Much love,Juliet.

this is truly beautiful and oh so gorgeous. it's just so vivid and all together compelling.

I love the first stanza. . . it's good over-all, but the first stanza just does it for me. . . Excellent.

Wonderful voice in this. Makes the reader connect to the words, and understand the feeling. Good write.

This is just so pretty "sustaining the saturdays

when we wrotelullabies in the sky"

there's just that beautiful feeling of reflection .. like someone remembering & craving a feeling they wish that they could experience again.

this is so simply done, but it's absolutely perfect that way. love the ending. love the whole thing. amazing write.

o so prettyful excellent beautiful after staying up all night, beautiful poem

"sustaining the saturdays," that's so pretty. I loved it.

'heavy heart still stuck insustaining the saturdays' aww... love it. and the ending, its just saying how they were simple things but you miss them... *sigh* gorgeous.

"sustaining the saturdays".. tell me about it, it feels like you're pulling this straight out of my own life... weird : ) no wonder your writing always hits me in the heart...

mezzie

'when we wrote lullabies in the sky', such a lovely and visual image created there. lovely piece, great work.

'heavy heart still stuck, in sustaining saturdays' - The visual is a sad girl looking out the window, just remembering. Well done. ~*