-GASP- This one was good too! ^-^

oh and i just got an idea where we could talk to each other... if you are willing... think you could reply to my messages on your profile here on fictionpress? XD

g2g luv ya

~Ashlee~

O! I liked this one as well!! Your poems are so good... better than i could do... T.T -sniffle-

~UchihaSakuraXItachi~

i like this, it's interesting and very precise.but i don't think the last word should be in bold, it carries so much power by itself, and the way you've used it, although i understand how you've let the format slowly build up towards it, and that was definitely effective.

good description in this.