That was ** brilliant! I was laughing so hard I got strnage looks from my fellow dumb ** class mates. I wish I could delete them... T.T
But this was really cool and it does make you wonder if your charcters are actually thinking that between long chapters of your stories.

Interesting... now I wanna try something like that! I think I will. COOL!

-ShimoAneue

U ddifn't write this... LOL. i am just kidding with U. WRITE MORE. IF U DON'T WRITE MORE i WIL SCREAM

Very creative. Whats so great about this is that the characters are undoubtedly alive from the very begining. So when their world reveals itself it is no stretch to have feelings about the relationship between the characters and the author.

There were a couple things that I thought about while reading this. One is that you introduced a boy druggie and a girl Korean, but the others are left unspecified. A few words to bring us more in sympathy with these characters might help, but I don't know, its quite well done as it is.

I also noticed a reference to an unknown character called C (e.g. "scoffed C"). Hm...

This story has the character I seek in fiction, it makes my mind invent things, think about things, involve myself in the story. For example, toward the end I kept sort of hoping the characters would take over the story.

This was very enjoyable.

I really like it. Cool idea.

LOL!

This is so funny! From page one to the last word, this is so amazingly funny!

Oh, and I love the quote from Sophie's World. Wow. What an excellent way to interpret it.

Kudos to you!

Just one thing: instead of P in one place you typed C. Other than that, though, this is amazing!

Great job. This is hilarious.

~*Bambam*~

Lol funny!

I can't believe you haven't yet gotten a review for this, it's absolutely brilliant! from the title to the last word, this is one of the most cleverly written pieces on this site.