Heyz!

Wow, that's so cool. You managed to capture it perfectly like you do with all your written fics/fanfics. But the thing is I think that perhaps..maybe..you're reflecting yourself in the poem- sorryz if I'm wrong :( bleh. ANYways, post more!!

lotsaluv,s2_perfection

oh my. the imagery was just so beautiful and subtle. brilliantly written.

-trinity

Somehow the words 'drab cream' really add to the poem. Otherwise its very thought-provoking. Nice job. -O.Rhia

everyone has a sticky-tape dream. you've captured this one very well, although I hope that she can someday see the sea and smile herself.

Nice poem,the last line comes across particarualy strong.