Reviews for The Black and White Dreams

Reviews For: The Black and White Dreams

Loveless To Self 2007-08-30 ch 5,	abuseI love how you so carefully choose every word. I can never see a flaw in your writing. it sucks for me as a critic, but its great for me as a reader.
Loveless To Self 2007-06-20 ch 4,	abuseI'm noticing more and more in your writing that you never seem to have any hint of clutter, or run ons, or even off topic blabber. everything word is coherent and meaningful...that takes skill.
Loveless To Self 2006-09-30 ch 1,	abuseMan, this is harsh. I would love to read more of this, because it's a consistent work from you that looks promising, but I can't read the rest because...well, I'm attending a college where wireless internet is extremely secured, and I can't access this site. I would love to read more when I get the chance though, and I want to tell you the beginning is great.
The Melissa Occult 2006-06-25 ch 6,	abusenow for the review. this last chapter is perfect. this whole thing seems like a scattered tale. something happened on one day and then something on some other random day. it really rather fits. Damien's a guy right? why do guys write as girls and vice versa? is it some other part of us we wnat to connect to? I liked this story, but I was hungry for more. I'm not satisfied with these few chapters, I want to read some more. (I don't have you on author alert, so sorry, add you in a second.) soldier on my dear lady haberdasher, ~plays the part from damien rice's song "amie" about soldiers~ have a stunning night, (not a day because we all need time to hide) EiB
The Melissa Occult 2006-06-25 ch 5,	abuseshrinks are asses
The Melissa Occult 2006-06-25 ch 2,	abusesmile
marti10 2006-04-22 ch 1,	abuseI love the descriptions! It makes me keep on reading. AMAZING FICTION! Absolutely love it. If you're interested, could you read my story? It's called: Famous.
Broken Telephone 2006-04-22 ch 1,	abuseThis has a really neat tone to it...it's totally addicting! Great job! I like it!

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