this is a good story. here can you check out my story. i just put it up today. i think you would like it. it'snot that long but still is really sweet.

My beautiful Ariel.

check it out.

Wow... Wonderfully written!

Hugies K

(And don't worry girl, I ain't leaving. :) Friends stick together...:)

Wow, this was really good.You have a very unique writing style, I liked it. 5 stars! Great job!