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Reviews For: To You,With Love
Miley Hauke
2008-03-19
ch 1, 		abuseYour second stanza was really striking and reminded me of something that happened in my own past. Great work!
Ralleigen
2006-04-22
ch 1, 		abuseReally good wording, and nice metaphor about the storm, but near the end about the "Razor friend" and "my tool" it kind of confused me, and might confuse others more.
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