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| KawaiiCB 2006-04-23 ch 1,   | Wow, this is really sad! :-( It was really good though, great work! |
| Kagamusha 2006-04-22 ch 1, | wow, i love the concepts behind this--very well written, bravo! --K |
| Raina 2006-04-22 ch 1, | Not bad. Is this a song? Silly me, I think all poems with rhythm are songs, so. XD Anyway, no real complaints. I like the cynicism and anger. Nice tone and all that jizz. |