That was really good, I wish I had someone to be with.

very lovely and beautiful imagery and creates such a sweet atmosphere :) magnus

I really like the softness of this. Can I keep it? :)

absolutely beautiful.

Wow, that's gorgeous. I love the repetition of the "like this" parts. Wonderful poem. Keep writing! :)

Very beautiful... "WoW"

~WINKS~

I. Love. This. You've captured everything so perfectly... intensely, intensely gorgeous. Insanely great job!

Fascinating, plain and simple truth presented in a warped way that leaves you boggling and wanting more. Awesome work!

Beautiful, simple, hypnotic, even. The steady rhythm is wonderful, and the simplicity of the ideas and lines only strengths the poem.

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.

I like this.. I can totally relate... I love that ending... well done.. I might rate it K+ though

wonderful, i love it!

--K

Beautiful. I am so happy that marriage is going so well for you! I think this will be my last review... I am leaving FictionPress.

Best wishes.~WH

very nice poem! good descriptions.. made me think about my boyfriend and me.. :)

Wow! This was absolutely great. I loved it, particularly because I can really relate to it. I think this is one of the mose concise and accurate descriptions of love that I have ever read. Really great job!

-Lynn

"as my mind lingers on your lips" I love that line, amoung others. I also like the ryming. "I breath like this" fits this perfectly. You've done a great job capturing an emotion(or a way of life).