Share/Save/Bookmark
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Another Place, Another Time

she smolders
2007-03-10
ch 1,
abuseThis story breaks my heart, especially the last line. It's a little sad and happy at the same time.
ossining
2006-06-07
ch 1,
abuseWow, that scene was so perfectly described, I felt like I was there. Wonderful job. It's such a great picture, too, and something great to write about. I'm impressed. Keep writing! :)
Skiv
2006-04-29
ch 1,
abuseThat was really interesting, I've always considered doing something like that, with some pictures I see. Sometimes there are just those pictures that send a story straight into your head, you know? I never write them down though, more's the pity. I always love your style, just the way you string together words, with just the right amount of simple adjectives, complex nouns, and lesser-used verbs.

~`Skiv
method acting
2006-04-23
ch 1,
abuseThe address worked for me, and I didn't see that at all. But what a writer you truly are. The intro just sets the pace every time. Your thoughts are provoking and interesting. Amazing doublethink. I like the original quote. Very interesting. The little boy didn't seem the sort necessarily to me, but that made met hink harder. I found the connection you were on. Interesting. Inspiring. Lovely job, as always, my friend.
Unya
2006-04-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseThe address you gave didn't work.

But anyway, the story was short, but I liked it. Good work.
Return to Top