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| she smolders 2007-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThis story breaks my heart, especially the last line. It's a little sad and happy at the same time. |
| ossining 2006-06-07 ch 1, | abuseWow, that scene was so perfectly described, I felt like I was there. Wonderful job. It's such a great picture, too, and something great to write about. I'm impressed. Keep writing! :) |
| Skiv 2006-04-29 ch 1, | abuseThat was really interesting, I've always considered doing something like that, with some pictures I see. Sometimes there are just those pictures that send a story straight into your head, you know? I never write them down though, more's the pity. I always love your style, just the way you string together words, with just the right amount of simple adjectives, complex nouns, and lesser-used verbs. ~`Skiv |
| method acting 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abuseThe address worked for me, and I didn't see that at all. But what a writer you truly are. The intro just sets the pace every time. Your thoughts are provoking and interesting. Amazing doublethink. I like the original quote. Very interesting. The little boy didn't seem the sort necessarily to me, but that made met hink harder. I found the connection you were on. Interesting. Inspiring. Lovely job, as always, my friend. |
| Unya 2006-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe address you gave didn't work. But anyway, the story was short, but I liked it. Good work. |