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| je suis une pomme du terre. 2006-11-15 ch 1, | abuseomg I really really liked this. I like the last two lines especially. I also like how free the poem is, and it flows really well. |
| Scarlet Hero 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuseThanks for the review, even though it was damn harsh, but you do have alot of good writing skills. Good work on the poem, it's very nice. waterhealer |
| Rogue Blank 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abuseThis makes a whole lot of sense, and it is amazingly accurate. I feel almost the same way, but maybe slightly different. I do like it and it portrays what some others may see in the world of today, but they never make their thoughts known. Much Love,Riley |
| HeartSongMusicLyric 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abuseI read this poem and all i can think about is, hell ya! What the hell is wrong with this world, let alone America. I love how you fused so much of what's going on in this world of America in a piece that's not to depressing but not to lenient on the reason for writing on this subject. My favorite line in this piece would definitely be "Like a phoenix from the ashes, too bad we shot it down as it rose again" i love the irony you used in this line. Well done, i'd say that this is my favorite political poem so far. Keep writing! |