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| T. Rowland 2006-11-04 ch 1,  | abusevery beautiful imagery. well done! |
| a lonely september 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseoh god i loved this. you wrote it so well. and the ending lines, so commanding, so forceful. this poem was just so great. you can tell how freakin intelligent you are in this poem... wow. you've got skill. &isoundstupid. |
| Ethereal Oceans 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI love this. It's so poetic and the imagery is amazing. There's real meaning to this and you've wrote it beautifully. You have talent, so use it. |
| frigg 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abuseCette j'adore. I love especially the first and last stanza. The imagery is absolutely loverly, and the alliteration. cheers, Kelle. |
| Charley Keed 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abuseI am very much a fan of your work. Just the way you arrange your words and the messages you convey are astounding. This was certainly no exception. Excellent! |
| straightfromtheheart16 2006-04-23 ch 1, | abusei really like that... i know the way your feeling |