'you’ve seen both heaven and hell

reflected in burning sunsets and shooting stars'

those lines were the essence of the poem. you captured everything in those two lines and brought wonderful imagery with it,fantastic work.

I apologize for not reviewing sooner..

I *love* the parenthesis at the bottom.. it's so true. Once again, your works are heartbreaking and beautiful - a morbid attraction that I never get enough of.

That last line touched me. Beautiful."being a martyr is just a tragic obsession" I love this line especially.

Oh wow. There are really no words to describe the emotion that's running through me right now. Your poem is just...brilliant. The imagery and the power in this really overwhelms. Excellent.

i love the last two lines... this is ag rat poem. love the way it's written, the way this chick is described. awesome. its been ages. what's up?

'(it gets a little complicatedwhen you find beauty in the breakdown)' this whole poem is amazing, but especially the parenthesis, and especially the last bit of parenthesis. love it.

i love all the contrasts you have here, & your descriptive voice. "being a martyr is just a tragic obsession", "that’s the price you pay/ to gaze into the crystal mist/ and try to convince yourself that you’re unforgettable" - i love the jaded, smug tone of that. i'm not sure if i like the image of the flat tire & the broken-down car at the end because it doesn't fit with the rest of the imagery you used, but the final two lines are beautiful. nice job.

~kait

heart-wrenching. curious and painful, it just rips out your heart and leaves you in tears. it was so intense and morbid, yet there is so much passion in it, which makes it beautiful.

"shot your 20mm.because lies don’t break hearts"

^♥'ed that line. beautiful and truthful.

great job.

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the tone in this poem is very sharp. there were two lines that reminded me exactly of two songs...creative borrowing perhaps? but I liked this don't worry.

I would paste my favourite line here but I can't seem to pick one! tis too hard!:):)

wow, i like the language and style of this piece, very powerful yet elegant at the same time.

keep writing!