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Reviews For: On to Empty Spaces through Open Windows

frayedlifeforce
2006-04-28
ch 1,
beautiful, heart-rending. this had just some wonderful imagery in it.
cornered.sensations
2006-04-24
ch 1,
I think we all have a time where we ponder on this thought, always wishing and hoping about whether our admirer likes us. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, I love the way you worded it 'to open that time-rusted window' as if we've visited again and again. Great work
sunshineofyourlife
2006-04-23
ch 1,
oh geez. awesome. really good job. i love the format. the longing is so real. i love it.

~*sunshine*~
simpleplan13
2006-04-23
ch 1,
i like that last line the one in a gazillion... and the format is great too.. thanks for your review!
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