| Reviews for On to Empty Spaces through Open Windows |
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frayedlifeforce 4/28/06 . chapter 1beautiful, heart-rending. this had just some wonderful imagery in it. |
cornered.sensations 4/24/06 . chapter 1I think we all have a time where we ponder on this thought, always wishing and hoping about whether our admirer likes us. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, I love the way you worded it 'to open that time-rusted window' as if we've visited again and again. Great work |
sunshineofyourlife 4/23/06 . chapter 1oh geez. awesome. really good job. i love the format. the longing is so real. i love it. *sunshine* |
simpleplan13 4/23/06 . chapter 1i like that last line the one in a gazillion... and the format is great too.. thanks for your review! |