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| frayedlifeforce 2006-04-28 ch 1, | beautiful, heart-rending. this had just some wonderful imagery in it. |
| cornered.sensations 2006-04-24 ch 1, | I think we all have a time where we ponder on this thought, always wishing and hoping about whether our admirer likes us. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, I love the way you worded it 'to open that time-rusted window' as if we've visited again and again. Great work |
| sunshineofyourlife 2006-04-23 ch 1, | oh geez. awesome. really good job. i love the format. the longing is so real. i love it. ~*sunshine*~ |
| simpleplan13 2006-04-23 ch 1, | i like that last line the one in a gazillion... and the format is great too.. thanks for your review! |