beautiful, heart-rending. this had just some wonderful imagery in it.

I think we all have a time where we ponder on this thought, always wishing and hoping about whether our admirer likes us. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, I love the way you worded it 'to open that time-rusted window' as if we've visited again and again. Great work

oh geez. awesome. really good job. i love the format. the longing is so real. i love it.

*sunshine*

i like that last line the one in a gazillion... and the format is great too.. thanks for your review!