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Guacamole
2008-06-28
ch 19,
ahahaha Kylie and Blake are so cute! even though she doesn't like him yet...but anyways this was good i thought and as usual Nadia and Dean are the cute couple they are. :D update again soon!
miss-life
2008-06-24
ch 19,
Why are you apologizing? It's my "job" to give you a review and I preffer if i have something constructive to say ( I can't always praise you! your ego would explode :P)
I liked the Kyle and Blake parts :D I think Blake can be quite the seducer ;)
It's nice to see our favourite couple all love-dovey! Is there anymore drama lying ahead for them??

Summer here and you know what that means-->ICE CREAM TIME!

__Tina__
angel1357
2008-06-23
ch 19,
Aren't authors supposed to feel iffy about every chapter they first put up? I always do... I liked this one.. again, specially cause I finally figured Blake out, or at least you revealed it, whatever works.

I thought all the writing went very well... though I'm getting confused as to why Kylie hates Blake so much... and why Nadia doesn't want to go to the dance with Dean... but I'm sure all will be explained.. update soon!
claireponcherrii
2008-06-23
ch 1,
omg, this is so good
Warning Warning I have OCD
2008-06-23
ch 19,
hehe thats really good very long...i got a nimb bum but i like it. keep going ok well until you finish it of course ^_^
Hydie
2008-03-30
ch 18,
YAY!! I love this story. :)
misery sister
2008-03-25
ch 18,
Great story so far! Keep it up! :D
angel1357
2008-03-22
ch 18,
Ahh! There wasn't any information about what Blake wanted from Nadia! Sheesh, next chapter, next chapter, that's all I keep hearing!

Oh well, this, I must say, was a wonderful little update, and I won't give you a timeline, cause even I can't keep to one. I'm sorry to hear about 5 less chapters, but it's all about what you want to write! So... update soon!

p.s.-This was a wonderful chapter, if I didn't say so. I loved it very much.
EAZYADICT
2008-03-20
ch 18,
lol yes ur officially grounded!! n of course u can keep the comp. but no procrastinating! i think i do enough for both of us!
SuperCUTEJensen
2008-03-18
ch 18,
aww cute...cant wait for the next one
Guacamole
2008-03-18
ch 18,
hehe how cute as usual! sorry i haven't been reading/reviewing in a while been busy but this was good keep it up!
Elle8605
2008-03-18
ch 18,
OMG! OMG! OMG! First off..sorry for not reviewing. I have just gotten around to catching up on this chapter and the previous one. I feel so bad for Nadia and her father..they both have so much going on that..wow. I don't know what to say.

I'm glad that Nadia told Dean everything involving Blake.

Can't wait for the next update!

Xx Elle xX
TehRyder
2008-03-18
ch 18,
Aww! This story is so cute. And despite being a cliched plot, it is carried out in a not cliched way. I absolutely love it!
miss-life
2008-03-18
ch 17,
Okay I just realised I review chapter 17 and 18 on the review for chapter 18 =/
How dumb is that?
So all the dress stuf and the skipping goes here and the hands situation goes there
:D If that makes any sense at all :P

I wanted to ask you something: How come you don't reply to the reviews over the "Reply" button on FP rather than posting them at the end of the chapters?

I just noticed this :P

__Tina__
miss-life
2008-03-18
ch 18,
:-O
Oh my god!
I am so sorry!
You will not believe what happened! FP didn't send me an alert for chapter 17!!
I'm so sorry!! I've went and read it and I'll go back and review it but first let's focuse on chapter 18.
1. I think you mixed up the hand at the dancing scene. If she has her left hand on his shoulder, his right hand will be around her waist and his left hand will be holding her right one.
2. After that heated scene they go straight to the "standing in line" scene. It just skips from one conversation to another without anything to indicate some time passed (not necessarily sentences but maybe that line that FP offers)
3. My Blake theory is still possible but I'm still not going to reveal it (so you can't prove that I got it wrong :P)
4. Nadia's dad is scaring me ( I thought he was going suicidal on us for a minute :P) and I was a bit sceptic about Blake and his abilites. If I wouldn't know better he could pass as a gay ;) I kid, I kid.

Well I'm off to review chapter 17! :D And you better be off to write chapter 19! (Maybe the ice cream would be a bit out of place if the story is around Valentine's Day? Cause it's March in Europe and we just got a whole bunch of snow :P)

__Tina__
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