i love the simplicity of the format with the complex issue of love/marriage - i know what u mean, i can relate to the subject! and the rhythm is amazing... lilting and song-like. i really like the half rhymes, too. great piece!

As always, I love what you write. This one, its a feeling I identify with at times. Like, you see all these cutesy people, and all you can say is like...man.

but thats okay. we will be the brides... buahahaa