 spiderfly 2006-07-21 . chapter 1This is another really good one! Going on my Favourite Stories list, definitely. I like the cynicism of the narrator and the dangerous imagery. |
 Phantomess Spira 2006-06-04 . chapter 1Very passionate, MC, good work! I don't know who the narrator is, but she sure has a tough life, and she's coping. |
 Shadow Gryphon 2006-04-28 . chapter 1Interesting perspective. Not angsty, but not happy. Sort of passive, though, but that's a common feeling in my dreams, at least. Not really sure what I think of this, aside from the fact that its good. Why? I don't really know... |
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