|Reviews for What You Do To Me|
| Kalista Jia 3/21/09 . chapter 1
oh this is sad. Poor character. I like the way how the narrator kept saying he/she is going it for her/his crush/lover.
| Raleven 1/4/08 . chapter 1
Wow, this is intense...not the happiest of themes, but I can understand this poem quite well. It flows really nicely and I love the repetition at the end of "Slash, slash, slash, slash, more, more, more." it's one of those things that build up emotions (to me at least...) I also like the way you use all caps for certain parts it really emphasizes the anger behind the words. The only thing that bugs me a bit about this poem is the line "Why? Do u ask" because you used "u" instead of "you," but because you wrote this at 1 AM, I'll forgive you. P Keep going! I love your poetry!
| Arafax 2/23/07 . chapter 1
The emotion flows well from this piece. I actually wrote a song on this subject only mine has a happier ending I must say. Good job though.
| insaneasylum29 6/11/06 . chapter 1
It's good. I really like it, though the lines seem to get longer and longer as it goes on. *Shrugs* Maybe you meant to do this? I've written poetry like that before. I don't know. It's something my English teacher warned me about. It's really good, though. I can feel the emotion really well.
| bright-silver-star 6/1/06 . chapter 1
thats really good...very sad, but good
| A Beautiful Nightmare 4/30/06 . chapter 1
Wow... intense... the last word of this poem really ties it up... well done... but just one CC... "Because its ment to be" - it should be "Because it's meant to be"... other than that... it was good!
| Pokey831 4/23/06 . chapter 1
Wow. Really deep. Sounds like a lot of stuff i've written though. I went through a phase where all i wrote was poetry like this. So from one poet to another, very nice. You write well
| Serenity Muse 4/23/06 . chapter 1
This is really good, it's very descriptive and real. :-)
| x-kit-x 4/23/06 . chapter 1
Once again all i have to say is wow. I love the sense of imagery created here... the language used is easily understood and overall I liked it and can relate to how the character seems to feel - (is that a good thing? lol). Well done.