I found this to be actually quite entertaining. I did have a little bit of a hard time getting into it during the first few lines, but once I did, I wanted to continue.
Now, to answer your question about why you have a lack of reviews~

First I shall say that I would hardly call the collection that you have review-less. Some are better than nothing. But maybe some do not wish to review because...well...from what I've seen on other stories that you've reviewed, you plug for yourself time and time again.

Say I were to come here and read one of your stories-which I'm growing to enjoy very much, mind you-and in this review I came and said "Hey, I read and reviewed your story, come and check mine out!"

Do you not find that rude? I'm not saying your a bad person or a bad writer or something, but would you not find that offensive that, here you are, hoping against hope that someone will come and read your story and give it fair praise and critique~ and then someone turns right around and starts advertising themselves on your stories.

If you have people that you are well aquainted with on the site, and maybe you would like a paticular story that you're quite proud of to be advertised, then see if they'll plug for your story on their profile page or something. It's most certainly better than spamming the reviews for other authors.

Take care and best of luck to you in your writings.
-Ace

EXCELLENT! love the way You've portrayed Kailex as such a realsitic and true character; while still malicious and cunning.

nice chapter! hope to read more chapters soon!

*claps* Bravo!

A coupla errors I noticed... "Hold" instead of "Holy", nothing serious!!

*grin* Awesome.

I like your stories and i hope oyu continue writing.

Yay!

I like this better here. Really, really great! Did ya rework it a little?

I loved the description of the Goddess. Loved. =)

So, nu, what're you waiting for? Write more!

o this sounds really interesting so far, plz update soon!