Very interesting, though not as well written, with its choppiness and mistakes in originality, as the other story of yours that I review. I love last-sentance clinchers like this. It almost sounds postapocalyptic, but not really...like a society who lives off of the apocolypse happening some time. I understand totally what you mean about your stories sound like they do because you get them on a bus--that's what I would have said if I had been able to say it. hope that made sense~Nemonus