Gorgeous poem,I like the flow to the last three parts,brought out the beauty of crying...

**The review was honest and to the point,how I am ever to better my work if someone doesn't say "hey,that just doesn't cut it"...I thank you kindly for the review!

I like this- it's an interesting format and the images are lovely. I like the last line: "...must cry tears of pure fire." Keep writing!- Sarika

Very nice indeed! The imagery is captivating and defintitely paints a vivid picture of a truly tortured soul.

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O... me likes! ^_^

interesting poem, admittedly though, I have no idea what it is about. Please could you give me an idea so that I may reread it.

cool... very cool... I like it! could be longer though... Write On!