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| clar-the-pirate 2006-04-23 ch 1,  | abuseI love your format, the way the story doubles back and builds; it's really ... interesting? No, enthralling. I just couldn't stop reading until the ending was right.Squirrels has to be the weirdest motif I have ever read, but it works. Really well.Are you sure Telephones is the best name for it? |
| Zure 2006-04-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseLol...loved it. I didn't spot anything worth improving. |