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Ruarc 2006-04-26 . chapter 1
you know, i don't think it'll ever stop impressing me how you keep on functioning with the cards you've been dealt. for some reason, this piece just really reiterated that for me.

it's well written, in the clinical sense, and i love the style- it just, well, yours. i don't think i could ever mistake it for someone else's work. and outside of the clinical bit, it's just... heartwrenching. you took a topic that a lot of people write about, that is pretty cliche when most of them do, and make it just... honest. that's not the best word for it, but i cna't find one that fits. it's obviously real and honest, but it's something else as well, something i can't quite place. fantastic work, love.
Ashes.to.Acid 2006-04-26 . chapter 1
...this made me cry, I can relate to this so much it's scary. Very heartbreaking.
Briana 2006-04-25 . chapter 1
You are so good at expressing your feelings. Are you really a cutter? I'm guessing you are. It's pretty bad to lie about something like that. This showed true writing abilites and talent. You're a really good writer.

(P.S.- The physical pain is a lot better isn't it? Like my half sister said, the outside heals, the inside doesn't!!)
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