Hello there.
This is amazzing omg WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED IT? you have no logical explanation well I can only say one thing, Naomi I'm surprised at you. It's so good wow! Anyway gtg do Math! Yay! J'adore Math.

Naomi!
its amazing!
write more- i cant wait 2 c what will happen!
its a really gr8 story- as r all of yours...

It was very good! You have a lot of decription, and that is a GOOD thing, but you may want to run it by a friend for grammar before publishing...

But I really liked it! You should update soon!