crazy. reminds me of a really messed up dark poem i started writing in my head once.

very cool. Mostly because of the beat and flow of this. I liked the second stanza the most. Very good work. Keep it up.

"'trigger-happy men skid bullets off their tonguesand teenage boys show their machete loveby cutting up everyone they see –" = that is, like, the most awesomest line in the world of awsomest things.

~* Noelle

reminds me of 'sir psycho sexy' but im random like that. i like, 'trigger-happy men skid bullets off their tonguesand teenage boys show their machete loveby cutting up everyone they see –'.. .nice.

Okay, I'll admit it... I don't understand this.

But that doesn't keep me from being madly in love with it.

"trigger-happy men skid bullets off their tongues".

"trigger-happy men skid bullets off their tongues"

wow, that a way to put that.

very nice piece.

omg... so true, the damned media, and you think television is bad>.> good work, love the message

keep writing!